Score: 9

"Light and refreshing~"

submission: Kazmo - Aspiration [Demo]

date: October 8, 2009

You're right about the chord sequence it's definitely a light uplifting one. And through out the song it has bass, yet it doesn't feel very heavy at all.

In the beginning you have a background synth that's playing behind the lead repetitively. I think that synth sometimes sounds a bit too metallic in some parts. Such as at 0:50 - 1:10. Otherwise it's a good synth that fits well.

The sudden entrance of stuff at 1:10 is really great, it brings a big stand to the song and works well. I certainly want to hear the full version of this whenever you finish it.

The piano that enters at 2:12 is nice, although it sounds a little like it's underwater. It's got a watery ambient feel to it. Not that it's a bad thing really, it kind of fits actually, although if you were aiming for a more HQ piano sound then that isn't quite it.

The ending is... well leaving me hanging. xD Finish it. xP

Good to hear you still making wonderful music. Keep it up my friend.

~Phyrnna ^_^

Score: 9

"Really nice song."

submission: For My Friends! [Game3 Entry]

date: September 27, 2009

This certainly does get that feel across, the feeling of starting on a long journey. It's also got a good melody. ^_^

You've got talent kid, and I'll certainly be a fan of your music for a long time.

~Phyrnna ^_^

P.S. When I post up my submission for Game 3, could you review also?

Score: 6

"Really nice!"

submission: Portentous Odyssey

date: August 22, 2009

This is a really nice song!

Composition-wise, this song is really good. I like it's structure and it doesn't really get boring. It could possibly use more instruments, but as it is it makes for a great duet.

Sound-wise, this song needs a lot of work. Notably the mixing is non-existent and so is the mastering. Both of which are needed to bring your song to life.

Great song! I hope to see more from you!

~Phyrnna ^_^

Score: 9

"Wonderful song yet again"

submission: {B.A.B.} Endless Possibilities

date: August 20, 2009

You have quite the wonderful orchestrations here! I've quite enjoyed your music, and this certainly doesn't disappoint. The looping isn't perfect, but hey... can't be perfect with MP3's.

The start is a nice dramatic build up that you have there. You make excellent use of the woodwind instruments for their little bits of chiming in here and there. Really great charm in the music, it's not really "epic" but more of a wide open overworld type of theme. The title certainly befits it well.

The near end part after 0:45 is built up well and has good energy, it reminds me of people riding horses. It's a little short, but otherwise it works well as a break before it loops back again.

Not much complaints about this song from me. ^.^ Wonderfully done! I'm going to download this one onto my IPod.

~Phyrnna ^_^

Score: 8

"Edirol....?"

submission: TBBAM: Ivan's Theme

date: June 2, 2009

You have a pretty good song here. The one thing that I want to comment on is the mastering/mixing of the sounds. I understand that you use Edirol (which I also have). Which is great. But the sounds... it seems as if you left them raw and untouched. Which.. when you're keeping to only Edirol sounds, it sounds great. But you've got sounds from outside of Edirol and there is a slight disconnect in how the sounds sound. I would try using EQ to change how that Edirol sounds, and try also looking into combining sounds from more than just Edirol orchestra.
But that's just my suggestions. :P If you don't believe what I say, just go check out some of my songs. :D
Good luck anyways!

~Phyrnna ^_^

Score: 8

"Really nice!"

submission: Memories of Melodies (demo)

date: May 31, 2009

You have a really nice song here.
The only complaint I would have is the choirs that come in. They sound very gutteral (<-word that came up in head). Not very clear choirs.

But otherwise, a great song! I want to hear the rest.

~Phyrnna ^_^

Score: 8

"Wow, quite a song."

submission: RequiumofTime[W.I..P][WingR]

date: May 29, 2009

I'm rating this as an eight as a song by itself.
Personally, the quality leaves plenty to be desired, and from the hear of it it seems you recorded it off an electric keyboard that played accompaniment strings in the background. Which is alright... although you could do so much more.

This song has so much potential, I'm faving it. :D

~Phyrnna ^_^

Score: 10

"100th Review!"

submission: Delinquent 100

date: May 27, 2009

100th Review with 10 Stars. :3

What can I say about this song? It's great. That's all that I really need to say. ;)

Great job on the song!

~Phyrnna ^_^ <3

Score: 9

"Hahahah. That happened to me too!"

submission: Wake Up~

date: May 27, 2009

That final thing.. yep. So happened to me. I believe Twins of Duality was done right before my Calc final. O_O; Stayed up so late that night... good thing the final wasn't until the middle of the day so that I could sleep.

Anyways, onto the song...

This song is certainly filling with creativity! The lead melody is very good as previously stated below. The only thing that I can think of improving is the mastering on it. Otherwise it sounds great. Notably the piano needs to sound more... real? xD

Great job! :D And good to see you are still around and kicking. xD

~Phyrnna ^_^

Score: 6

"Whoa...."

submission: -The Journey- V3

date: May 7, 2009

That piano needs to be changed.... >_< It's a bad sounding piano.
Maybe I can help you out with that.
The bass itself also needs some mixing... right now it borderline clips.
Yeah... overall this does need some mixing help. Especially at 1:36 where it really clips.
That and your synths need to be a bit smoother.

~Phyrnna ^_^