Age/Gender: 21, Female
Location: Flying Above the Clouds
Job: Overworked Student
Greetings! I mostly like staying around the Audio Portal, listening to the popular and new music that is around. I hope my reviews are appreciated, I really try to put some time into them. Glad to meet you all! -Phyrnna ^_^<3
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Very informative and well explained. Certainly a good beginner's guide if you keep it up. :D
FLASH! :D:D
~Phyrnna ^_^
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Really nice click game. I would love to see a sequel to this one.
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I was half scared by the title to watch it. But it's actually not too bad. Good effects. :D
Keep working at it! Can't wait for 3!
-HFX ^_^
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You're right about the chord sequence it's definitely a light uplifting one. And through out the song it has bass, yet it doesn't feel very heavy at all.
In the beginning you have a background synth that's playing behind the lead repetitively. I think that synth sometimes sounds a bit too metallic in some parts. Such as at 0:50 - 1:10. Otherwise it's a good synth that fits well.
The sudden entrance of stuff at 1:10 is really great, it brings a big stand to the song and works well. I certainly want to hear the full version of this whenever you finish it.
The piano that enters at 2:12 is nice, although it sounds a little like it's underwater. It's got a watery ambient feel to it. Not that it's a bad thing really, it kind of fits actually, although if you were aiming for a more HQ piano sound then that isn't quite it.
The ending is... well leaving me hanging. xD Finish it. xP
Good to hear you still making wonderful music. Keep it up my friend.
~Phyrnna ^_^
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This certainly does get that feel across, the feeling of starting on a long journey. It's also got a good melody. ^_^
You've got talent kid, and I'll certainly be a fan of your music for a long time.
~Phyrnna ^_^
P.S. When I post up my submission for Game 3, could you review also?
Author's Response:
Thanks alot :)
and sure I'll review^^
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This is a really nice song!
Composition-wise, this song is really good. I like it's structure and it doesn't really get boring. It could possibly use more instruments, but as it is it makes for a great duet.
Sound-wise, this song needs a lot of work. Notably the mixing is non-existent and so is the mastering. Both of which are needed to bring your song to life.
Great song! I hope to see more from you!
~Phyrnna ^_^
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the comment :) It's my first ever submission so it's much appreciated!
Yeah, I agree, but I don't have any mixing or mastering software, if I did I would have spent a much greater deal of time on it. But as I said, it was composed and in sibelius and exported as a midi, and I had some MIDI to MP3 converter the reverb and slight mastering, although I think I may have over done it :S
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